My peer review session personally really helped me understand how to improve my paper drastically. I appreciated their honesty, they gave me just the right amount of cristism. When I first went into this paper I did not think I would be using any pictures in my paper, but now I think differently. After my peers gave me some advice on what to add I will be adding pictures to my paper. I wasnt as open minded as I think I should've been, after all this paper I have the freedom to do what I want. My peers with their cristism made me more creative and I like that. They told me to change my tone in some parts of my paper and looking at it from a different angle I agree. Having others look over my work really has helped me get a better look on how I want my paper to turn out.